Wednesday, August 15, 2007

A LOOSE THREAD IN THE LIFE OF A SHOE SHINE BOY

Duration: 00:54 minutes
Upload Time: 07-05-02 05:07:05
User: NewWarriorMan
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What if? Written By Reid Baer I am cautiously Pulling on this tiny thread On a dreadfully cold night Not knowing whether It will take me Into my heart Or plum out of my head ... Wondering out loud "What if ... I just took a little nap near the fire in this warm little bed?" But no ... I'm still up Worrying What's up ahead. What if? What if ... I'm unraveling My only thick blanket And eventually I'll end up frozen dead?!

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ejames1998 ::: Favorites
very cool thanks for email!!
07-06-01 22:51:53
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NewWarriorMan ::: Favorites
yidgy and ejames, thanks much!
07-06-06 00:29:16
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theerion ::: Favorites
wow
07-06-21 22:19:01
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NewWarriorMan ::: Favorites
theerion, I'll take that as a compliment! Thank you.
07-06-22 01:28:24
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triciakitty ::: Favorites
Holy crap! This was very cool! And I think it's great that you included the words in your description. What an awesome poem!
07-06-22 07:28:22
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NewWarriorMan ::: Favorites
triciakitty, it's always a blessing to have a poetic soul like yours appreciate my work. I'm honored. Thank you, my new friend! - Reid
07-06-22 13:15:28
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tmar15 ::: Favorites
ur fucking creepy
07-07-11 16:24:50
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Voask ::: Favorites
kinda dry, and the end with dead.. its been done and done and done and done
07-07-18 17:29:21
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NewWarriorMan ::: Favorites
lol Voask ... I guess that's why 8 thousand plus tuned in ... critics ... lol
07-07-18 21:02:00
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AMIAD35 ::: Favorites
um damn
07-07-19 16:16:40
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